The Burden
In the morning, I awoke, a burden lying on my soul.
I thought of it as I lay.
Within I heard a voice, it spoke; It knew my heart, this weight,
my whole,
and harried me through the day.
A pool I sensed: dark, still and deep; in which my burden I could cast.
The day had gone, I longed for sleep but still the voice inside held fast:
It said I deserved this load, should not put it down.
It said I could not trust myself to judge,
So I sat beside the pool,
and watched the ripples in the sunset light.
Steve Clarke replied:
I like the concept mate and it sounds really good.
Well done!
Steve xx
November 2, 2009 at 12:00 am. Permalink.