The Burden

In the morning, I awoke, a burden lying on my soul.
I thought of it as I lay.

Within I heard a voice, it spoke; It knew my heart, this weight,
my whole,
and harried me through the day.

A pool I sensed: dark, still and deep; in which my burden I could cast.
The day had gone, I longed for sleep but still the voice inside held fast:
It said I deserved this load, should not put it down.
It said I could not trust myself to judge,

So I sat beside the pool,
and watched the ripples in the sunset light.

October 24, 2009. Tags: , , , , , , , . Poorly Prepared Poetry.

One Comment

  1. Steve Clarke replied:

    I like the concept mate and it sounds really good.

    Well done!

    Steve xx

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